Carnage Park 2016

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In the scorching desert heat of 1978, two seasoned thieves, “Scorpion Joe” (name) and Lenny, embarked on a desperate escape, dragging Vivian, their unsuspecting hostage, along with them. The aftermath of their botched heist left Lenny lying lifeless in the sand, his body riddled with bullets from their hasty retreat. As Vivian’s reality began to unravel, she revealed that her visit to the bank was not a robbery, but rather a last-ditch effort to secure a loan and save her family’s farm from foreclosure. Meanwhile, an unseen assailant exacted revenge on Joe’s car, puncturing one of its tires with calculated precision. As Vivian covertly reached for a switchblade lying within arm’s reach, Joe’s hubris got the better of him, and he handcuffed her to the steering wheel, boasting that he would take out anyone who dared to defy them. Little did he know, his pride would be short-lived. The hidden sniper, Wyatt Moss, claimed jurisdiction over the land and justified Joe’s demise as a necessary evil. As Vivian begged for mercy, Wyatt instead opted for sedation, knocking her unconscious with a potent drug.

The scene shifted to Wyatt’s compound, where his brother, the sheriff, paid him an unexpected visit, inquiring about Vivian’s whereabouts. Wyatt’s denial was met with a warning from his sibling: “She’s too well known to be silenced.” Unbeknownst to Wyatt, Vivian had already woken up and found herself handcuffed to Joe’s lifeless corpse. With her newfound freedom, she set out to exact revenge, stumbling upon an old PA system with a record player attached. As the haunting sounds of a siren filled the air, Wyatt took aim from his hiding spot, prompting Vivian to flee for her life. Her escape route was fraught with peril, including a treacherous pit and a seemingly deceased woman clutching a makeshift shiv. Vivian seized the opportunity to revive the woman, only to have Wyatt cut her down in a hail of bullets. As the sheriff burst onto the scene, loudly announcing his presence, Vivian saw an opening to strike back at her tormentor. With Wyatt momentarily distracted by the commotion, Vivian pounced, snatching his rifle and turning it against him.

As Vivian abandons Travis’s lifeless form, rifle still clutched in his hand, she embarks on a perilous quest for freedom within the confines of the fenced-in compound. Her footsteps lead her to the cries of an injured man, where she finds Travis mired in a bear trap. With a mix of compassion and trepidation, she frees him, only to discover that he’s unable to move, his fate all but sealed by the surrounding miles of electric fencing. Travis’s lamentations echo through the desolate landscape as Vivian assures him that she’ll return with help, having allegedly dispatched Wyatt. Her search for solace leads her to a grim trophy room filled with gruesome reminders of humanity’s darker side - including human ears.

Meanwhile, Wyatt’s malevolent presence manifests on the CB radio, his taunts piercing Vivian’s resolve like a cold knife. The sound of gunfire shatters the silence, and Vivian’s attention is redirected towards the approaching sheriff, who unwittingly becomes her next victim. As she dispatches him with a chilling efficiency, the reality of Wyatt’s duplicity dawns on her, and she’s left reeling from the brutal turn of events.

With Wyatt’s cackles still echoing in her mind, Vivian seizes the opportunity to flee through a hidden trapdoor, which leads her into the labyrinthine depths of a mine. The air is thick with the stench of death as she navigates through a macabre landscape replete with lifeless bodies, dolls, and a cacophony of distorted music courtesy of a PA system that seems to revel in her despair.

As Wyatt’s relentless pursuit forces Vivian to take cover among the dead, their shoot-out triggers a cave-in, plunging Wyatt into an uncertain fate. The darkness is punctuated only by his maniacal laughter and military-inspired ravings, which serve as a stark reminder of the unyielding horror that drives him.

With the lights extinguished, Vivian presses on, eventually breaking through a boarded-up exit to emerge into the harsh light of day. Her hysterical laughter is a desperate attempt to exorcise the demons that haunt her every step. A note left behind would later reveal that she had escaped to safety, but at what cost? The discovery of dozens of bodies in the compound would serve as a grim testament to Wyatt’s twisted legacy - one that saw him escape justice, leaving Vivian forever scarred by their brutal encounter.